Friday, March 13, 2009
Entertainment is one of the most important parts of our lives. It is typically what we spend most of our money on, and what we would like to spend most of our time doing. So it's only natural that Second Life is filled with entertainment. And as in real life, there are many different kinds of people who like to do many different kinds of things. This is also reflected in Second Life. There are many different types of entertainment in Second Life. The ones that I enjoyed the most are sporting events, clubs and theatre shows. Each of these have their own unique set of rules like in Artstonia Village it is required to dress in medieval clothes and participate in role play, fans such as sporting team fans and enjoyment.
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watch the filler sentences...such as "many different kinds of people doing many different kinds of things..."...filler...also watch repeating yourself..."many different types" is used several times...also you bring up your three main points however the last sentences you bring up something that i am not sure if you will write about or not...needs revision to be clear as to what your thesis statement is and your focus...end your intro with your thesis statement...nothing need follow...
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