Thursday, January 29, 2009

Topic and Thesis Statement

The topic that I chose for my first short paper was the Reiligon and Spirituality. Here is a rough draft of my thesis statement:

Exploring religion and spirituality in Secdond life will lead to the discovorance of the importance of such things even in a virtual enviornment, things that the virtual envoirnment offers people of religion and spirituality that the real world does not, all of the different types of religions among Second Life and how they can personaly effect people.

1 comment:

  1. this is a bit confusing wording here...revise a bit to make your three or four main points a bit more clear...what locations might you visit to support these experiences?

    dr. c

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